Since term two we have been we have been writing dialogues. A dialogue is when we are given picture or a video and we have to write a story about that scene. We have done a lot of dialogues like Monkey Symphony, Tent Talk, the car ride to Auckland and the Paper, Scissors, Rock.
Then we had to choose one of the dialogues to improve and publish it onto our blogs. I chose improve my Monkey Symphony. Once I improved it I shared it with the Ms Ardelle to get feedback. Once I got the feedback we had to work on it even more and apply the feedback. When I was done improving my writing to the best it can be it was time for me to publish on my blog.
I think I was good at using lots of descriptive language and similes e.g “you’re like a cat that won’t stop meowing”.
I think I was good at knowing where to put punctuation.
E.g: can I have a turn on the piano please Johnny?
I need to work on trying to introduce the characters so the reader knows who they are and also try and paint a picture for the reader to know where the scene is set.
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