Monkey symphony

                       THE FLASH BACK

writing

Jason: Farr Johnny man, you can play the piano like the boss. You don’t need to practice you are already so good.

Johnny: Thanks Jason! Oi she’s finally not watching me like a hawk. I can finally do whatever I want.

Jason: (whispers) Can I have a turn on the piano Johnny?

Johnny: Sure just be sensible.

Jason: Ok I will.

Teacher: Jason STOP playing the piano it’s not your turn.

Jason: Blah blah blah why can’t I have a turn? you always let Johnny  have a turn why not me.

Teacher: DON’T YOU blah blah blah me little boy! you have no respect you need to show respect to your teacher and then maybe I might let you have a turn.

Jason: See there you go again using you big loud mouth you're like a cat that won’t stop meowing and you aren’t my mum you can’t make me stop.

Teacher: DON’T YOU DARE LAY A FINGER ON THAT PIANO JASON! or you’ll get it.

Jason: Get what miss a hiding with the wooden stick….. Aye is that your plan to keep being violent to kids ohhhhh you're sad to us.

Teacher: GET OUT JASON YOU ARE THE WORST MONKEY I HAVE EVER TRIED TO TEACH PIANO!

 

Jason: All goods I don’t care if you kick me out cause I am sick of being treated like a little kid that gets hit with the wooden stick when I get things wrong.

Johnny: No Jason you can’t leave me here to suffer by myself.

Teacher: NO Johnny he can’t stay he has made his decision he can’t come back here now he has to go… now get back to playing the piano

Johnny: But...

Teacher: BUT NOTHING get back to playing the piano Johnny…. Don’t even look at his disgraceful face.

Johnny: Fine.

I was learning to use dialogue to tell a story and paint a picture in the reader's head.

I think I was good at using expression for each character.

For example: BUT NOTHING get back to playing the piano Johnny…. Don’t even look at his disgraceful face.

I think I was good at describing what each character was doing.

For example: Jason STOP playing the piano it’s not your turn.

I think I was good at punctuation and using capital letters when someone was shouting.

For example: GET OUT JASON YOU ARE THE WORST MONKEY I HAVE EVER TRIED TO TEACH PIANO!